I shared this in the FB group earlier so I'll share it here. I had a writing assignment in my Creative Writing class and I chose to imagine what ShpongleLand would be like. We had 10 minutes to write something and here's what I came up with. PLEASE feel free to critique, offer suggestions etc.

And as always...Stay Shpongled!!!

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Corderosa Amada
almost 5 years

Tara, I noticed that too and I really didn't know what to do with the rest. I was trying to go from large picture to small object but it got really choppy

Tara Binger
almost 5 years

Goes from abstract - specific is what I meant lol

Tara Binger
almost 5 years

Love it! The last line is a slightly different tone than the rest of the poem. Not that it's bad, I love it! Just bringing to your attention :)

Staler Verweij
almost 5 years

awesome, I love it.

richario
almost 5 years

No critique, just a ticket please!

CaNNaBiZ CaNucK
almost 5 years

seconded man.. I love it (::: sry I don't have any suggestions lol I think it's just right.

cazam75
almost 5 years

I love it..